1st Draft of MUNOFS

Hi everyone. As nobody knows, this is the Overseas Family School Model United Nations Congress, where it would be like Clarence's HMCA, that Clarence had showed everyone regarding the ACE presentation. I am currently doing Human Rights of Brazil and this is my first draft that I proudly show to everyone.



On the topic of child labor-->

Thank you Honourable Chair.

Now this delegate of Brazil shall start on the topic of Child labour in Brazil. So how old do children in Brazil usually start work at? It is an unfortunate fact, but roughly four million children between the ages of five and 17 work in Brazil. However hard the government work to cut down the number of underage children working, they had only cut down by a mere 50%! What is that supposed to mean? This delegate of Brazil believes that child labour must be abolished by any means possible in order to allow Brazil to grow in terms of economics and become a developed country. What is the use of giving out stipends out to families in order to make the children less possible to become underage workers when they still do not have enough money to allow themselves to live or even their children?

This delegate of Brazil believes that the poverty of the families in Brazil is the main root to the problem.

This delegate of Brazil shall now yield the time back to the Chair.

Now, on to the next topic of secret and forcible movement of people across international boarders -->

Thank You Honourable Chair.

This delegate of Brazil is extremely alarmed by the fact that between 1,200 and 1,500 Bolivians come to Brazil to work and to live, and this only shows the statistics of Bolivians illegally coming down to Brazil. There are so many surrounding countries around Brazil and this only shows one inconvenient fact. Many people secretly come down to Brazil to get a job illegally. Although so, the Brazilian government has introduced some solutions that have greatly reduced the number of illegal movement of people. Now, this delegate of Brazil feels that this problem must be nipped in the bud, it must stop somewhere, by any means possible.

This delegate of Brazil believes that the main root of this problem lies in the government and not the people.

This delegate of Brazil shall now yield the time back to the Chair.

This would conclude my first draft on the human rights in Brazil. If any of you have any questions or suggestions to how I can spice up my speech, please leave a comment on this blog post.

Thank you.